LOVE IT, as i'm the client its a funny feeling when you get the email and click to view and hope you like it, so i was well relieved when i saw it. I didn't expect Ash to do it as I had said if he was to busy don't worry but he pushed through and came up with a great design.
Ash is right in saying its a tough one, rose being so obvious and potentially tacky.
i can definately see it as a business card, cropped horizontal for a website header.
the frosting behind the words is great, and the white cut through vertical works well, i do see rhythm's point of view but you could spend your life finding something different.
to top it off it gets helenas approval and that means its a winner BIG time.
thanks Ash
tim